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Use of Present simple with “like” and “love”

While writing, there are some aspects you should be careful about, missing information required will take points away. You are getting better at writing; unfortunately, it is not perfect yet. There are some points you forgot; checking the grammar structures can help you make fewer mistakes the next time. Your writing is well! There is always something you can correct, but you have learned to use the present simple with the verbs like and love correctly. Excellent!