You need more practice – You can express ideas with simple structures. Nevertheless you need more confidence and practice.You can do a better job of speaking. Try to speak louder and more clearly; it was difficult to understand your words. Also, you probably made grammar mistakes and did not include all the requested elements.You have accurate structures and the coherence and understanding is quite good. The use of the structures in a great way and the speech is well organized. The rhythm, and intonation sound quite well and you only present natural pauses.