You need to work harder! Try to study more your verbs and their conjugation, review again the grammar forms for simple past and improve your vocabulary. It is not an easy task but it is necessary if you really want to learn how to do it well. Don’t give up!Good! You are getting better, unfortunately is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about, check carefully the grammar structure in past to improve your writing. It is necessary that you remember to follow the instructions required. Try doing some brainstorm and practice new vocabulary too. That’ll do!Excellent! You are doing well! Your writing is acceptable. You are accomplishing the task and you have also paid attention to the topic. Congratulations!