You need to try harder! Your grammar mistakes and misspellings are not good for this activity. To avoid that you should first check your ideas, get familiar with spelling and revise all grammar forms. It is hard word indeed, but it’ll bring you success. Keep trying!.Good! Your writing needs work, you are doing well but there are things you can improve. You can practice more and try to revise your structures and spelling. Start now!Great! Very nice job, you could express your ideas clearly, paying attention to grammar, punctuation, and vocabulary. Congratulations!