Your grammar mistakes and misspellings are not good for this activity. To avoid that you should first check your ideas, get familiar with spelling and revise all grammar forms. It is hard word indeed, but it’ll bring you success. Keep trying!
Your writing needs to be polished, you are doing well but it is not perfect yet. You can practice more and try to revise your structures and spelling. Start now!
Really nice job, you are capable of expressing your ideas clearly, paying attention to grammar, punctuation, and vocabulary. Congratulations!