Not even close! You seem to be distracted. Pay attention to grammar forms, progressive structures need verb to be + ing form of the verb, check your connectors and vocabulary. There are more connectors that can help you be a better speaker. Good work! You showed some problems but your ideas were clear. You need to improve your fluency and avoid long pauses. Trust your knowledge and don’t give up. Congratulations! Your speaking is clear and natural. You do not seem to struggle during the activity. Good use of grammar and pronunciation. Continue using these strategies and learn more expressions and vocabulary to be even better.