You used capital letters at the beginning of the paragraphs, after periods, and when using proper nouns.
The text had a little and an introduction to the topic, making it enjoyable to read.
The ideas in writing were clear and had a harmonious sequence.
You wrote past simple and past continuous sentences correctly.
Your text had well-structured paragraphs.
You used punctuation marks correctly.
The text’s length was as required.
The text had a conclusion expressing a clear opinion about the topic.
The description of the photo answered all the questions indicated.
Besides the description of your photo, there were contributions to the pictures of the companions.
You are starting to write but there are some aspects you should be careful. Do not forget to answer everything that is asked and mention all the points that are required. Not answering or missing information will take points away.
You are getting better at writings, unfortunately is not perfect yet. There are some points that you are forgetting about and checking the grammar structures can help you make less mistakes the next time.
Very good! Your writing is now acceptable. There is always something that can be corrected but you are certainly answering what is being asked and you have also paid attention to the topic. Congrats!