CRITERIA
Excellent
Acceptable
No acceptable
Grammar and functions
Tools 8 and 10
Vocabulary
Tool 6
Coherence
Tool 7

You can do a better job in writing. Be careful with your spelling, grammar and punctuation; you probably make a lot of mistakes in these aspects of writing. You did a good job but you can do better. There are some mistakes in spelling, grammar and punctuation; be careful with those! You did a great job! You made virtually no mistakes in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Congratulations!