Criteria
Excellent
Good
Most improve
Pronunciation
Fluency
Content (AS + Adjective/ adverb + AS)
Vocabulary

You are starting to speak but there is still a lot to work on. You make too many hesitations while talking, there are many grammar mistakes not only in the structure you are trying to express but also in other structures you are suppose to know by now. You made quite a good attempt, there are still some things to work out like the hesitation and the use of the structure “AS adjective/adverb AS” but you are definitely doing a good job. It is also important that you pay attention on the use of the structure to talk about comparison. Very good! Your speaking is now acceptable. You make still some minor aspects that you can correct but your speaking is now acceptable. Congratulations!