Criteria
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Vocabulary
Task accomplishment
Fluency
Pronunciation
Adverbial phrase and Adverb usage

Keep on practicing speaking to improve pronunciation. Just remember that speaking clearly and slowly is not always a bad thing to change. More practice needed. The more you speak, the better speaker you are. There is still a long way to go, but you are on the right path. Well done! Ideas rightly expressed, pronunciation quite acceptable, and the grammatical form well used. You are doing excellently.